Here is my illustrated KABLAM with my Super Hero M. I Kept working on it till now so i would have it as complete as I could. I gave it some color to make everything pop and much like the older comic book versions with their outlines.
Very COOL! You should spend as much time on the guy getting kicked as you do with the one kicking. The back ground and colors work great! The type is a little weak. Larger and overlapping might help. You might also play around with putting her in front and behind some of the characters.
cool but the SFX is still weak. It needs to be more BAM in your face action. It does have a old comic style to it sorta. Try doing what chad suggested for the type.
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Very COOL! You should spend as much time on the guy getting kicked as you do with the one kicking. The back ground and colors work great! The type is a little weak. Larger and overlapping might help. You might also play around with putting her in front and behind some of the characters.
ReplyDeletecool but the SFX is still weak. It needs to be more BAM in your face action. It does have a old comic style to it sorta. Try doing what chad suggested for the type.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good movement illustration because i do feel like its almost 3D so go job with that. The girl hiding behind the L is bugging me but good job
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